Female Sparrow

GemmaGemma Registered Users Posts: 119 Major grins
edited June 13, 2013 in Wildlife
A female sparrow - looking at the yellow at the base of its beak I think it's a juvenile bird.

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  • GemmaGemma Registered Users Posts: 119 Major grins
    edited June 4, 2013
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  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited June 7, 2013
    The blah background kinda kills an otherwise engaging image. You nailed the exposure and focus, and the critter's cute, but . . . ne_nau.gif
    If I may be so bold as to offer a suggestion, set yourself up for your BG first. Then wait for your critter to pose in it. Patience, patience, patience.
    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
  • puzzledpaulpuzzledpaul Registered Users Posts: 1,621 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2013
    Would agree with previous comments + imo 'rear end / quarter' shots are rarely as effective / engaging as one with the subject looking towards cam to some extent.
    Re the importance of bg ... for anyone checking tickboxes (big 'hi' to Zoomer), it's second only to the stuff that's essential for our chosen field of endeavour.

    Far too many otherwise decent shots are spoilt because its importance has been overlooked / forgotten - yes, I realise / accept that in real life, we get lemons slung in our direction, but we often also have the option to do something about it too.

    Light
    Background
    Composition
    Pose

    pp
  • GemmaGemma Registered Users Posts: 119 Major grins
    edited June 8, 2013
    Thank you both very much for the constructive criticism - it's appreciated.
  • JoopJoop Registered Users Posts: 48 Big grins
    edited June 13, 2013
    Sharpness is good ! Color?
    Try Selective color, Neutrals and Cooling filter, LBB

    sorry for my poor English.
  • GemmaGemma Registered Users Posts: 119 Major grins
    edited June 13, 2013
    Thank you very much for your comments.

    Please don't apologise for your English, it's a lot better than my Dutch.
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