Krystal Beach Shoot

jonh68jonh68 Registered Users Posts: 2,711 Major grins
edited July 12, 2013 in People
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Comments

  • Bryce WilsonBryce Wilson Registered Users Posts: 1,586 Major grins
    edited July 7, 2013
    I'm REALLY, REALLY liking number six. Eight looks a bit too over retouched for me taste.

    Nine is a strong contender with number six as my favorite.

    Like the concept and pose with number one, but the back of her hand with the knuckles and veins kind of kills it for me.
  • DonFischerDonFischer Registered Users Posts: 128 Major grins
    edited July 7, 2013
    I like number 3 the best. Then I think number 8.
  • jonh68jonh68 Registered Users Posts: 2,711 Major grins
    edited July 8, 2013
    I'm REALLY, REALLY liking number six. Eight looks a bit too over retouched for me taste.

    Nine is a strong contender with number six as my favorite.

    Like the concept and pose with number one, but the back of her hand with the knuckles and veins kind of kills it for me.

    Thanks. I can see that for 8. I brought out the shadows more and toned down highlights. I wanted a more processed look but maybe over did it.
  • jonh68jonh68 Registered Users Posts: 2,711 Major grins
    edited July 8, 2013
    DonFischer wrote: »
    I like number 3 the best. Then I think number 8.

    Thank you!
  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited July 8, 2013
    Nice series. 7 & 9 I think are very nice. Great job. 7 has a neat feeling and 9 takes it out of the park. You really did a nice job on OCF.
  • jonh68jonh68 Registered Users Posts: 2,711 Major grins
    edited July 8, 2013
    Hackbone wrote: »
    Nice series. 7 & 9 I think are very nice. Great job. 7 has a neat feeling and 9 takes it out of the park. You really did a nice job on OCF.

    Thanks! I wish i had more time to work with her. I have some ideas of how to showcase her hair more but she is moving to Atlanta to pursue an architect degree.
  • FlyNavyFlyNavy Registered Users Posts: 1,350 Major grins
    edited July 8, 2013
  • zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited July 11, 2013
    Generally good stuff.
    Posing is a bit stiff in some and a bit of distracting wayward hair in some.
    Some very nice shots in the group, beautiful subject, nice job.
    7 8 9 for me. & has some distracting shadows....but still like it.....if I had to pick a fav....8
  • Dooginfif20Dooginfif20 Registered Users Posts: 845 Major grins
    edited July 12, 2013
    Im gonna go with #6 as #7 & #9 are kinda strange to me. What was your lighting setup? Looking at #7 I would have moved the light to the other side of her face so you dont get the strange shadows from her hair. That would have also fixed the horrible shadow on her right arm. #6 is the winner to me!
  • jonh68jonh68 Registered Users Posts: 2,711 Major grins
    edited July 12, 2013
    Im gonna go with #6 as #7 & #9 are kinda strange to me. What was your lighting setup? Looking at #7 I would have moved the light to the other side of her face so you dont get the strange shadows from her hair. That would have also fixed the horrible shadow on her right arm. #6 is the winner to me!

    I was using a AB800 without any modification on 7 since the wind started to pick up by then. 6 I used an umbrella.

    In regards to 7, if I had moved the light to the other side then I would have been on the same side of the sun and there would have been more shadows on the right side of the pic. Personally, I like the look in her hair and the shadow on the arm doesn't bother. Shadows in general don't bother me.

    Can you explain how 9 looks strange?
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