What a smile.

HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
edited July 24, 2013 in People
This mornings subject, a wonderful gal who used to be my secretary many years ago. She's 42 now.

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Charles
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Comments

  • DKellyDKelly Registered Users Posts: 3 Big grins
    edited July 20, 2013
    I think the tilt in the corner and on the uprights on the railing in #1 make it look a little awkward, try straightening it, other than that not a bad group.


    Hackbone wrote: »
    This mornings subject, a wonderful gal who used to be my secretary many years ago. She's 42 now.

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  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2013
    It's a very old railing?lol
    Charles
    www.cameraone.biz
  • D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2013
    Nice smile indeed, on Pic 1 would correct the vertical and horizontal lines. Especially the corner of the wall as it is close to the edge of the picture.
    Pic 3 is my favorite , it would have been 4 but it is a bit old fashioned due to the effect of the dark background ellipse, the rim light does work well and the pose is nice.
    A photographer without a style, is like a pub without beer
  • TinstaflTinstafl Registered Users Posts: 355 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2013
    Number 3 is my favorite too.
  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited July 24, 2013
    Hack, I'm sure it's not but in the first three that smile looks forced to me. # 4 is the most natural.
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