Brenda

claudiusmax

This is my first time shooting with Brenda and also tried OCF for the first time. I was pleased with the results but I know it needs improvement, any ideas. Thanks.

D3Sshooter

I like the rim light, but the light that was used shines a bit to strong inbetween the arm ( Bright spot).
Avoid reflections in the spectacles by taking another angle.

claudiusmax

Thanks for the reply and yes I totally agree. I will shoot some more this weekend and see what I can come up with.

DonFischer

Could you get her to wear a lighter set of glass's? Those heavy one's are a distraction, IMO.

Just thought of them, wire rim. Won't have the huge shadow on her face either.

joshhuntnm

the only thing I don't like is the light on the glasses.

claudiusmax

joshhuntnm wrote: »

the only thing I don't like is the light on the glasses.

DonFischer wrote: »

Could you get her to wear a lighter set of glass's? Those heavy one's are a distraction, IMO.

Just thought of them, wire rim. Won't have the huge shadow on her face either.

I agree, she threw those on at the last minute and I thought they looked kinda cool, but the wire rims would really set it off. Thanks.

Bountyphotographer

I really dont like the light in the glasses at all. A bit too much light under her arm . Otherwise nice picture
I have to start posting my pics because I want to improve my skills and I know that this is a really good place .

Bounty