Girl in white

gfurmgfurm Registered Users Posts: 33 Big grins
edited August 10, 2013 in People
Hello

I'm more into landscape and macro but I did take few poitraits of my wife that I'm happy with.
This one is from 2010, not much PP done, just some exposure and sharpening.

Any good? What could be improved?

Greg

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  • puzzledpaulpuzzledpaul Registered Users Posts: 1,621 Major grins
    edited August 6, 2013
    gfurm wrote: »
    ...

    Any good?

    Yes.

    Minor nits like blown top, hair over her R eye don't matter (for me).

    I wondered what cropping a bit off LHS might look like for a 5:4 ... but again ... minor / irrelevant :)

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  • gfurmgfurm Registered Users Posts: 33 Big grins
    edited August 6, 2013
    Thanks

    BTW: it's not a studio shot or anything fancy. We were sitting on patio in Greek hotel in the evening and I was snapping away with my Pentax and external flash. No preparation whatsoever, not even makeup.
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  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited August 6, 2013
    For a snap shot it's first rate. I don't mean that as a left-handed compliment. I really like it.
    If it had been a studio shot, well of course there are improvements you could have made, but why go there. It should not be judged as a studio shot.
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  • SamSam Registered Users Posts: 7,419 Major grins
    edited August 6, 2013
    I like it. You have captured a look and mood. That's more important than a perfect image.

    Sam
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  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited August 6, 2013
    Sam wrote: »
    I like it. You have captured a look and mood. That's more important than a perfect image.

    Sam

    AMEN, AMEN, AMEN!

    and for the record, I agree. This shot catches the mood down to the ground. She seems really playful.
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  • D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
    edited August 7, 2013
    It is a lovely portrait and one can tell that the model is at ease . If I may comment, then I would frame picture in portrait format versus landscape and avoid central placement of the object.
    Well done.
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  • DonFischerDonFischer Registered Users Posts: 128 Major grins
    edited August 7, 2013
    I really like it too. I think that the hair over her eye actually adds to it, suggest's who she really is. Perfectly done portraits are nice but I like this type much better.
  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited August 7, 2013
    The only change I'd make would be to the crop - light, expression and pose are spot on. thumb.gif
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  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited August 8, 2013
    +1 to all. lovely shot..good techincals and good mood
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  • gfurmgfurm Registered Users Posts: 33 Big grins
    edited August 10, 2013
    Thank you for all comments.

    Greg
    http://gfurm.smugmug.com
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