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Couple HS Seniors...

PhotogbikerPhotogbiker Registered Users Posts: 351 Major grins
edited August 19, 2013 in People
Hey--occasional poster here, but really appreciate the great work and critique. Learn a lot from all of you.

Shot senior pics for a couple friends this spring.

Kelly

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Allison

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    joshhuntnmjoshhuntnm Registered Users Posts: 1,924 Major grins
    edited August 10, 2013
    nice everything. . . expression, lighting, background. . . good work!
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    DreadnoteDreadnote Registered Users Posts: 634 Major grins
    edited August 11, 2013
    +1

    These are great!
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    PhotogbikerPhotogbiker Registered Users Posts: 351 Major grins
    edited August 11, 2013
    Thanks guys. I learn a lot from the posts and critiques in this forum.
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    QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited August 15, 2013
    good stuff! I would put a slight vignette onjust about all of them though..just pull the eyes towards the subject a touch
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    michaelglennmichaelglenn Registered Users Posts: 442 Major grins
    edited August 15, 2013
    Really nice tones and lovely poses. That first girl looks a little stiff in #2 though, but the I enjoy everything else from the two sets. Post more! :)
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    BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2013
    I don't work with kids so I'm no expert (in anything for that matter) but these are seriously nice work.

    My only nit is that the smile in number 1 is half grimace. Then again, smiles are the hardest even for pro models.
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