53: Reflection on a Balcony

RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
edited December 12, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
This caught my eye as I was wandering around a few days ago:

47635913-L.jpg
Click on pic for EXIF

This is my first challenge entry, so I would love to hear some suggestions and advice.

Cheers,

Comments

  • rahmonsterrahmonster Registered Users Posts: 1,376 Major grins
    edited December 9, 2005
    I really like this picture, it is very clever. I don't think it needs much changing unless you wanted to try curves and brightness, but I like it quite the way it is.
    www.tmitchell.smugmug.com

    Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life...Picasso
  • DeeDee Registered Users Posts: 2,981 Major grins
    edited December 9, 2005
    That's pretty neat
    rsinmadrid wrote:
    This caught my eye as I was wandering around a few days ago:

    47635913-Th.jpg
    Click on pic for EXIF

    This is my first challenge entry, so I would love to hear some suggestions and advice.

    Cheers,

    I'd try curves or shadow/highlight to bring it out a little more.

    At first I didn't even think it was a reflection -- but then I can be dense sometimes!
    :):
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited December 10, 2005
    Dee wrote:
    I'd try curves or shadow/highlight to bring it out a little more.

    At first I didn't even think it was a reflection -- but then I can be dense sometimes!
    :):
    Thanks Dee and Rahmonster. I reworked it and came up with this:

    47732479-L.jpg

    I like this one better. What do you think?

    Cheers,
  • erich6erich6 Registered Users Posts: 1,638 Major grins
    edited December 10, 2005
    This is a good shot! I like the way the reflection almost looks like a mural on the building. Very nice. thumb.gif

    Erich
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited December 11, 2005
    erich6 wrote:
    This is a good shot! I like the way the reflection almost looks like a mural on the building. Very nice. thumb.gif

    Erich
    Thanks, Erich. Glad you liked it.
  • PhotosbychuckPhotosbychuck Registered Users Posts: 1,239 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2005
    Hi, rsinmadrid
    I like this reflection alot. It looks like a painting to me.clap.gif
    I don't like to edit my photos much.
    I would crop out the doors on the right side.
    That would make the big reflection the main subject.
    I like the photo to show it like I seen it.
    What do I know I have not had a top 10 photo yet.
    Good Luck in the contest.
    There are alot of good photographer on this site so, if you get top
    ten I think you have don't great.
    From what I have seen so far for the contest yours would be in my top
    ten list.

    Take Care,
    Charles Cassidy,
    D300S, 18-200mm VR, 70-300mm VR

    Aperture Focus Photography
    http://aperturefocus.com
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited December 12, 2005
    Hi, rsinmadrid

    I would crop out the doors on the right side.
    That would make the big reflection the main subject.
    I like the photo to show it like I seen it.

    Take Care,
    Charles Cassidy,
    Hey Chuck,

    I took your suggestion and cropped out the other windows but after a bit of thought I decided that I prefer the version that includes them. It better captured what I saw. The blue of the sky and white of the statues stood out partly because they were surrounded by a somber old building. The balcony was actually on the third floor of a five story building on a rather narrow street. I think the brightness of the reflection should make it pretty clear what the subject is :D.

    Thanks a lot for your comments. The competition here is certainly daunting for a newbie photographer like myself, but I have learned a lot just by participating in the challenge.

    Cheers,
Sign In or Register to comment.