Goinf way different

Bilsen

For those who have been hitting me for doing all commercial work, here we go:

1. Keep an eye on that parking lot outside.


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3.


4. Took me a good 20 min to get this lined up and lit



Like them or not, you gotta give me they're different from me

M38A1

Yep, a departure from your normal work....

I think #1 is the strongest for a variety of reasons. More specifically it's sharp focus.

I also like what you were trying to do in #4. Maybe focus more on the glass and it's image as a very close shot?

jonh68

One is best, but it kind of looks like she is about to, well take care of a nature call.

4 is the best concept but the lighting is off. You need dramatic lighting for this type of shot and the color doesn't add anything. I think maybe one light directly to the side of the model and an another also directly to the side of the glass would be better.

Bilsen

Thanks guys. I can do #2 & 3 sharper. I actually blurred them a bit but that's a personal choice.

Tinstafl

YEs they are different. I like 1,3 and 4.

Bilsen

Thanks Tin. Will be shooting w Amanda in October.