Geez Tom, I can't imagine not commenting on this beautiful set of a gorgeous model.
I love #1 (with a small nit - have her bring her nose just a bit more to yhe camera so there's some white on both sides of her eyes);
#2 not so much although the short lighting is really nice ( hair style and the big flat hand on her waist)
And I like #3 although my personal preference would have her connect w the camera. But I don't get out much. .
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As the others stated a nice set of pictures , where the girl / model comes over every time different.
Clean and nice PP.
1. I love the oveall tone in the picture, it brings kind of calmness . The soft light works great,
the eyes are OK for me, turning the nose more to the camera would have worked as well but it would have been another impression, Here I like the way she looks siteways...
The only thing I would change would be the position of the hands, now the look like fists , ready to knock one down. Fingers are nice and can add a lot of elegance to a picture, I also avoid to have the palm of the hand lateral to the camera as it makes them big. But besides that a great shot.
2. Love it, and the light (butterfly - narrow) works great. The groomed hair brings class to the overall scene.
3.Great shot as well, with an overall of light that works. The absent look does it for me and fits the pose. I also tend to work often with models that do not look in the camera , it just brings this extra part of absence . The hand holding the arm, is something I would try to position different. But then again , I am a bit obsessed with hands
So , nice work and I like to see more.
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I love #1 (with a small nit - have her bring her nose just a bit more to yhe camera so there's some white on both sides of her eyes);
#2 not so much although the short lighting is really nice ( hair style and the big flat hand on her waist)
And I like #3 although my personal preference would have her connect w the camera. But I don't get out much. .
Canon 600D; Canon 1D Mk2;
24-105 f4L IS; 70-200 f4L IS; 50mm 1.4; 28-75 f2.8; 55-250 IS; 580EX & (2) 430EX Flash,
Model Galleries: http://bilsen.zenfolio.com/
Everything Else: www.pbase.com/bilsen
Bryce Wilson - I am glad you like the lighting
Clean and nice PP.
1. I love the oveall tone in the picture, it brings kind of calmness . The soft light works great,
the eyes are OK for me, turning the nose more to the camera would have worked as well but it would have been another impression, Here I like the way she looks siteways...
The only thing I would change would be the position of the hands, now the look like fists , ready to knock one down. Fingers are nice and can add a lot of elegance to a picture, I also avoid to have the palm of the hand lateral to the camera as it makes them big. But besides that a great shot.
2. Love it, and the light (butterfly - narrow) works great. The groomed hair brings class to the overall scene.
3.Great shot as well, with an overall of light that works. The absent look does it for me and fits the pose. I also tend to work often with models that do not look in the camera , it just brings this extra part of absence . The hand holding the arm, is something I would try to position different. But then again , I am a bit obsessed with hands
So , nice work and I like to see more.
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