Model shoot

Raina.RaeRaina.Rae Registered Users Posts: 205 Major grins
edited August 19, 2013 in People
She asked for high fashion look similar to an Armani add. These are a few of the best from the shoot and that she liked. I was using to stand lights and an external camera flash. Please comment with constructive feed back.

1) Jalysa-29-M.jpg

2) Jalysa-26-M.jpg

3) Jalysa-34_b%26w_final-M.jpg

4) Jalysa-37-M.jpg

Comments

  • babowcbabowc Registered Users Posts: 510 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2013
    This is going to be harsh, but you asked for C&C!

    Armani ads seem to be B/W, but yours are color (or one B/W that seems overexposed) that are desaturated and possibly underexposed.
    2 and 3 seem over exposed.
    1 and 4 seem under exposed.
    In 4, the attention goes to the male model, not the female model.

    Overall, the poses are not very flattering to the model.
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  • D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2013
    1. I do love the first one, great toning
    2. two is a bit off (the color)
    3. Not sure about the expressions and composition. It just doesn't strike me.
    4. Wrong focus.... the girls should draw the attention.... but that is only my view.


    I would appreciate bigger pictures, they are so small that they are hard to judge.
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  • Raina.RaeRaina.Rae Registered Users Posts: 205 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2013
    Thank you for the comments.
    I didn't pose the model, I let her just do her thing since she had specific poses in her mind. She did like all 4 of these.
    I agree 1 might be a touch under exposed but I tend towards darker photos.
    babowc wrote: »
    This is going to be harsh, but you asked for C&C!

    Armani ads seem to be B/W, but yours are color (or one B/W that seems overexposed) that are desaturated and possibly underexposed.
    2 and 3 seem over exposed.
    1 and 4 seem under exposed.
    In 4, the attention goes to the male model, not the female model.

    Overall, the poses are not very flattering to the model.
  • Raina.RaeRaina.Rae Registered Users Posts: 205 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2013
    Thank you.
    Could you be more specific about what you mean that color seams off on #2?

    D3Sshooter wrote: »
    1. I do love the first one, great toning
    2. two is a bit off (the color)
    3. Not sure about the expressions and composition. It just doesn't strike me.
    4. Wrong focus.... the girls should draw the attention.... but that is only my view.


    I would appreciate bigger pictures, they are so small that they are hard to judge.
  • M38A1M38A1 Registered Users Posts: 1,317 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2013
    My observations for what it's worth...
    #1 - appears underexposed in general, specifically where the black hair meets the black background
    #2 - hair light seems way too hot and draws my attention there
    #3 - the male model is way too too hot drawing me there and the dark shadow around his head
    #4 - the male model head being the bright subject and that light tie pointing to his head never lets me see the female
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