A lot to like in this image. I do have to wonder why you used ISO 100 and 8 seconds?
The diffuse blue dot in the background is terribly distracting.
Otherwise, the strong side lighting is very conducive to the strong face and works well for the situation. Extremely nice subject placement and very good composition overall.
The low ISO is from an old habit of trying to shoot at base ISO at all times. I admit I need to brake myself of it.
I never noticed the blue dod, but now that you bring it up I can see how that's annoying. But I had no control over it's placement. I could remove it in post though.
I see what you are saying about cropping out the light pole. My only issue with cropping out the left is I feel it would not be as balanced, and would crowd the edge of the helicopter that is sticking out on the left. In all, the back ground is very busy. I did a low-key shot with another Marine sitting here, but didn't like how it turned out as much.
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The diffuse blue dot in the background is terribly distracting.
Otherwise, the strong side lighting is very conducive to the strong face and works well for the situation. Extremely nice subject placement and very good composition overall.
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I like the shot a lot. Agreed on the blue light and maybe a tighter crop to crop out the white pole light.
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The low ISO is from an old habit of trying to shoot at base ISO at all times. I admit I need to brake myself of it.
I never noticed the blue dod, but now that you bring it up I can see how that's annoying. But I had no control over it's placement. I could remove it in post though.
I see what you are saying about cropping out the light pole. My only issue with cropping out the left is I feel it would not be as balanced, and would crowd the edge of the helicopter that is sticking out on the left. In all, the back ground is very busy. I did a low-key shot with another Marine sitting here, but didn't like how it turned out as much.
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