Masterful! First one is so hard to get! Then I for one love the glitters of light running through the pictures and always go for it, rarely if ever have come even close to this!
i am going to agree with Cornflake on #1. I think it is pushed just a little too far. There is some tell-tell HDR effects going on in the sky and there is a lack of natural feel of depth along the ridge at right frame. The colors just transition without a feel of real separation between the ridges. Maybe increase your shadows a bit??
Looks like you guys made the right decision to bounce up that way though. Great light at great locations.
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Masterful! First one is so hard to get! Then I for one love the glitters of light running through the pictures and always go for it, rarely if ever have come even close to this!
i am going to agree with Cornflake on #1. I think it is pushed just a little too far. There is some tell-tell HDR effects going on in the sky and there is a lack of natural feel of depth along the ridge at right frame. The colors just transition without a feel of real separation between the ridges. Maybe increase your shadows a bit??
Looks like you guys made the right decision to bounce up that way though. Great light at great locations.
Aaron, #1 isn't an HDR at all, so there are certainly no HDR effects in the sky or anywhere else. It's a conventionally processed single frame processed mainly in LR mostly with a boost from the clarity slider and little more. I did some light dodge and burn and in PS, plus USM and Nik sharpening, and that's it. Honestly the PS finished version isn't significantly different from the LR original.
Aaron, #1 isn't an HDR at all, so there are certainly no HDR effects in the sky or anywhere else. It's a conventionally processed single frame processed mainly in LR mostly with a boost from the clarity slider and little more. I did some light dodge and burn and in PS, plus USM and Nik sharpening, and that's it. Honestly the PS finished version isn't significantly different from the LR original.
Sent you a PM with specifics.
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The black wisps in the sky actually do exist in the original scene but are magnified by the local contrast enhancements I did to mitigate the effect of shooting into the sun. Might be worth dialing back, so thanks for the input.
The black wisps in the sky actually do exist in the original scene but are magnified by the local contrast enhancements I did to mitigate the effect of shooting into the sun. Might be worth dialing back, so thanks for the input.
Joel....my 2 cents....reduction in clarity slider would make it even better, perhaps bit more masking and bit lower on sharpening........the blue "luminisence" slider, if you increase it, it might cause things to become slightly hazy and less contrasty, but more "natural". Finally, maybe a touch of warming up the temp...
Not sure if any of it would enhance it, but after seeing the discussion and looking at the picture at home, this is what I thought I would do!
Ok, here ya'll go. Reprocessed from scratch. Greatly reduced clarity applied ONLY to the foreground. Increased warmth a bit. Dialed back sharpening. See what you think.
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I really like this series, Joel. Relative to the first image, I have a slight... and I mean SLIGHT... preference for the revised version. This is another of your fairly recent efforts that has real potential for being marketed.
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Tom
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I really like this series, Joel. Relative to the first image, I have a slight... and I mean SLIGHT... preference for the revised version. This is another of your fairly recent efforts that has real potential for being marketed.
Take care,
Tom
Thanks very much for the generous comments, Tom. I always value your input.
Ok, here ya'll go. Reprocessed from scratch. Greatly reduced clarity applied ONLY to the foreground. Increased warmth a bit. Dialed back sharpening. See what you think.
Fantastic capture, Joel, as I have already told you. I so failed to get that crisp star...
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Looks like you guys made the right decision to bounce up that way though. Great light at great locations.
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Thanks, man.
Thanks, CC. I hadn't been there in years and it was great to get reaquainted with the area, albeit for a very brief visit.
Fair enough, thanks, Don.
Aaron, #1 isn't an HDR at all, so there are certainly no HDR effects in the sky or anywhere else. It's a conventionally processed single frame processed mainly in LR mostly with a boost from the clarity slider and little more. I did some light dodge and burn and in PS, plus USM and Nik sharpening, and that's it. Honestly the PS finished version isn't significantly different from the LR original.
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Sent you a PM with specifics.
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The black wisps in the sky actually do exist in the original scene but are magnified by the local contrast enhancements I did to mitigate the effect of shooting into the sun. Might be worth dialing back, so thanks for the input.
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Joel....my 2 cents....reduction in clarity slider would make it even better, perhaps bit more masking and bit lower on sharpening........the blue "luminisence" slider, if you increase it, it might cause things to become slightly hazy and less contrasty, but more "natural". Finally, maybe a touch of warming up the temp...
Not sure if any of it would enhance it, but after seeing the discussion and looking at the picture at home, this is what I thought I would do!
Cheers! No Flare staring at the Sun.....
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Would love to hear what others think! Great job as always!
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Thanks so much, Andy!
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Thanks, Bryan. Good to see you back. Post some shots!
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