Photo shoot with the Fianceé

ForceGhost · October 27, 2013

What do you guys think? C&C greatly appreciated.

kdog · October 27, 2013

First the good news. She's gorgeous. Plus, you clearly know how to operate your camera well. Exposures and general compositions are good. The poses, not so good. The first shot looks like she's getting punched in the face by the invisible man. The second shot would be acceptable in a series of other cleaner shots, I do like the way it forces you to look into her gorgeous eyes. It's the star of this series, but still misses the mark. The third shot, well, it looks like she's picking something out of her teeth. Plus the nose breaks the cheek line which is unflattering because it exaggerates the size of the nose.

ForceGhost · October 27, 2013

kdog wrote: »

First the good news. She's gorgeous. Plus, you clearly know how to operate your camera well. Exposures and general compositions are good. The poses, not so good. The first shot looks like she's getting punched in the face by the invisible man. The second shot would be acceptable in a series of other cleaner shots, I do like the way it forces you to look into her gorgeous eyes. It's the star of this series, but still misses the mark. The third shot, well, it looks like she's picking something out of her teeth. Plus the nose breaks the cheek line which is unflattering because it exaggerates the size of the nose.

Thanks a lot! She's most definitely a keeper!!

Poses need to be improved a lot, will take a look through all the threads here to get some more ideal poses.

Cheers for the C&C. I really appreciate it

Edit: What do you think of these ones? These were my "Not so sure" shots.

IMG_2477 by Jordon "ForceGhost" Brooker, on Flickr

IMG_2479 by Jordon "ForceGhost" Brooker, on Flickr