Finally ready

dsapix

After lurking for quite some time, I finally had a shoot that I felt would be ready to post and get some feedback. This forum has taught me a lot, and I'm looking to get some more feedback as I work to improve. These are all SOOC.

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Thanks in advance for any advice / comments you want to share.

Dan

Hackbone

For me 2 & 4 are your strongest with 2 being WOW and 4 being fun. For me #1 would be better cropped.....too much going on for my taste.....if you want the bike in the photo show the entire bike with a playful pose. On the last one I don't like the rim of the windshield cutting thru her head and her hair is messy. Again these are just my opinions and we all have one. Good work.

fjcvisual

Do you have any more pictures of the car? DOH!!

Great images though.

dsapix

Thanks Charles for your feedback. I appreciate your comments. It's funny, I knew #2 was a keeper when I previewed it on screen with the camera.

And I do have a few more pix of the car. I will try to get them posted.

Dan

kombizz

good capture of this model - I like #2

Tinstafl

I too like 2 and 4 too and agree that number 1 can be saved it you crop it a bit more. In four I would crop the the top of the boot out. Nicely done otherwise. Number 3 just does not do it for me.

dsapix

Thanks all for the feedback. I appreciate your willingness to help all of us grow. I hope I can return the favor some day.