Michele at the Docks and the Tracks

jonh68

I try to stay away from train tracks because it's a little cliched, but Michele wanted some and I had not taken any by them so I gave it a go. She had a headache and stuffed up with sinus problems so I just went with the no smile look.

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Bilsen

I like the entire set Jon.

I have never bought into the whole cliché thing. Railroad tracks became "cliché" because they make good sets. Nothing wrong with using them whether or not others have.

divamum

3/4/6/9 are just WOWZERS - 6 may be one of the best shots I've seen of yours

Something about the light in the first two is bugging me, although I'm not quite sure what

Hackbone

4-6-8 &10 do it for me. Great set.

Mitchell

These really pop. Nice work with your lighting!

kdotaylor

All really nice. LOVE #4!

kobistar

Great!

jonh68

Thanks! The railroad tracks are my own cliche avoidance. I think there are other ways to get the look without the tracks.

fool4thecity

/I thought the railroad tracks were the best of the set... Good use of light/flash. Nicely done.

Bryce Wilson

Six, seven and ten are just wowser.

The entire set is quite nice.

Five is kind of cool to me because it has a retro "50's color film look".

jonh68

divamum wrote: »

3/4/6/9 are just WOWZERS - 6 may be one of the best shots I've seen of yours

Something about the light in the first two is bugging me, although I'm not quite sure what

Thanks, does a close up help?

jonh68

Hackbone wrote: »

4-6-8 &10 do it for me. Great set.

Thank you!

jonh68

Bryce Wilson wrote: »

Six, seven and ten are just wowser.

The entire set is quite nice.

Five is kind of cool to me because it has a retro "50's color film look".

Thanks, I upped the vibrance a bit and then desaturated blue a bit on 5.

zoomer

loving 6, it all comes together in that one