Interesting subject and nice lighting, but, I find the crop/composition cramped and the cut-off portions of the container (by omission) distracting.
I think the monk in the background helps tell the story, but if you get an opportunity to re-shoot, I suggest a landscape aspect and off-setting the person from the incense
a bit, it will help open-up the composition.
Richard - Many thanks for your comments and I have to agree, I like your cropping much better than my own. Unfortunately, I only have this one image but I will replicate your crop because I like it better.
Also want to thank Earache, lensmole and torags for your input. I value any constructive advice and comments regarding my images.
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I think the monk in the background helps tell the story, but if you get an opportunity to re-shoot, I suggest a landscape aspect and off-setting the person from the incense
a bit, it will help open-up the composition.
Lensmole
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Hope you don't mind me mucking with your image. If you do, let me know and I'll take it down at once.
I think this a better balanced imaged and the frame gives stability to the vertical lines.
Lensmole
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Yup... good idea Richard - the tighter, square, crop brings the emphasis to the subject(s) and now the overlap doesn't bother me at all.
Also want to thank Earache, lensmole and torags for your input. I value any constructive advice and comments regarding my images.
http://fiddlefoto.smugmug.com
Cheers!
Stix