Prayers

FiddlestixFiddlestix Registered Users Posts: 145 Major grins
edited December 14, 2013 in Street and Documentary
Captured this image in a wat on a recent trip to Cambodia.
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Images from SE Asia - some like it HOT
http://fiddlefoto.smugmug.com

Cheers!
Stix

Comments

  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2013
    Well done
    Rags
  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2013
    Interesting subject and nice lighting, but, I find the crop/composition cramped and the cut-off portions of the container (by omission) distracting.
    I think the monk in the background helps tell the story, but if you get an opportunity to re-shoot, I suggest a landscape aspect and off-setting the person from the incense
    a bit, it will help open-up the composition.
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited December 14, 2013
    ^Yeah, just a step or two to either the right or left might have done it in this one.
  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2013
    I agree with the above comments in regards to the composition needing more nose room.
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited December 14, 2013
    Or, how about this:

    i-LfCdBcp-M.jpg

    Hope you don't mind me mucking with your image. If you do, let me know and I'll take it down at once.
  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2013
    Richard wrote: »
    Or, how about this:

    i-LfCdBcp-M.jpg

    Hope you don't mind me mucking with your image. If you do, let me know and I'll take it down at once.

    I think this a better balanced imaged and the frame gives stability to the vertical lines.
  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2013
    Richard wrote: »
    Or, how about this:

    i-LfCdBcp-M.jpg

    Hope you don't mind me mucking with your image. If you do, let me know and I'll take it down at once.

    Yup... good idea Richard - the tighter, square, crop brings the emphasis to the subject(s) and now the overlap doesn't bother me at all.
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • FiddlestixFiddlestix Registered Users Posts: 145 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2013
    Richard - Many thanks for your comments and I have to agree, I like your cropping much better than my own. Unfortunately, I only have this one image but I will replicate your crop because I like it better.

    Also want to thank Earache, lensmole and torags for your input. I value any constructive advice and comments regarding my images.
    Images from SE Asia - some like it HOT
    http://fiddlefoto.smugmug.com

    Cheers!
    Stix
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