Car and the city

Tom23

Couple of shots I took yesterday...on my way to parking lot


On the bus by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr


Diner by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr

On the parking lot


350Z by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr


350Z by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr


350Z by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr

WhatSheSaw

I am not much into car shots. That said, I really like the first one of the car shots. I like the angle of the car, the silver stripes of the corrugated steel in the background that lead the eye through the frame, the reflection of the corrugation in the windshield and on the hood. I like that the background is the same color as the car. I like the way the car dominates the frame. I might like it better if the pavement in the foreground were a bit darker.

The other two car shots don't work as well for me. I like the second better than the third. The straight shot and distance reduce the interest level in the third.

The bus doesn't appeal to me. Why did you crop it where you did? What does the partial window of the front section do for the picture? The people are too far away for it to be a people shot. I'm not sure what you're going for.

I like the texture of the building in the delibar shot. But the strips hanging down make it hard to read the writing on the window and draw attention away from the people. And I feel like the people ought to be the focus of the shot.

Just my 2 cents. If you want better feedback on the bus and delibar, you might try posting them in the Documentary forum. I'm still pretty naïve about street photography.

M38A1

That first car shot is poster-size worthy.... very nice.