Cliffs of Davenport
Stumblebum
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Someday I would have time and money to go to Cliffs of Moher. Davenport, CA is not a bad backup plan! All helpful pointers and critque cherished. Below are my attempts:
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#10 is a close second. Maybe you know that dude in the water but I'd clone him out. Now, if he was a hot girl, naked, that would be a different story.
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Thanks Jeff! Much appreciated!
Thanks AC!
Don't know the dude and would have no problem cloning him out even if he was my best friend. While I was taking the shot I could not have put out more negative energy towards the guy mentally. Then I figured that he is small enough, far enough, surrounded by uniform environment, so cloning him out would not be a problem and I took the shot.
I expected him to be a blur as it was 2 second shot. He somehow managed to remain still, despite the wave engulfing both him and me and my tripod. After second look, I think I got carried away by my imagination, and felt he was in-fact adding to the scene, since he is knee deep, staring at the horizon, like having a spiritual moment or contemplating suicide. Either way, something deep I felt. Thought picture may evoke similar thoughts in others. Guess not!
My faves are #3, #9, #10 - I think the dude adds a lot and does capture the mood you suggest - let him live!
Like Alex, I love #3 also - the water motion captured is right up-my-alley...
My small suggestions would be to crop in a bit more to increase the size of the rock
and so feature it more, and lift the shadows on the rock to reveal the texture in the darkest area a bit more.
Thank man! Agree completely on cropping. After being done, I view it from CC point of view, and #3, #4 and #5 can all close in on the main subject.
Come up the coast some weekend....I give you the tour! Maybe I get to pick up some pointers on technique....mean it! Cheers!
Hope schedules align. I am out of Country till first week of April starting March 14th.......SO CAL not so far....come up other time if it doesn't work this time!
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Thank J! I think this may be good time to head over there. Wild flowers are going to be coming out soon too. Lets get em!
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Hah ha! I am not as good or lucky as you so have to do other job to pay for all this! Actually I work in unix work-station and always have lap-top open with all the tabs and while program is running, I do THIS, so my big boss keeps walking into the lab and was giving me a dirty eye.....looking at the fact that I was typing up here.....so I got do some more work not less....:D In summer days will be longer so will definitely have chance to hang out at various places in evening! Then......
I really liked 1, 2, 3, 7, 9, 11 and 12. I grew up in Santa Cruz so I'm familiar with the cliffs along the coast. You've done a great job with them. Makes me homesick.
Thanks JBR! Dude is in!
Thanks man! I wish I was home sick in Hawaii!
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Tom
Thanks much Tom! I like the bird taking off after wave crashed on the rock too...adds something!
#3 is clearly your work. It looks like fog. ;-)
I also like the guy in the water, the branch in the water almost looks like his surf board. Cool shot.
I really need to take the time (and money) for a California trip. If you like Cliffs, you should try Sagres in Portugal.
Cheers,
Sílvio
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Thanks Silvio! Sure do love fog! Had not heard of Sagres, but will remember it! Someday to Europe! You have a contact in CA....remember that! Cheers!
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Thanks! Means a lot!