sidelit LA

byoshibyoshi Registered Users Posts: 353 Major grins
edited March 4, 2014 in Landscapes
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  • David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,245 moderator
    edited March 4, 2014
    Great shot. The hill, houses and that lone tall tree in the bottom right make for nice overall depth, and balanced with the hills at the top right.
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  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited March 4, 2014
    Good shot as usual!

    I like the composition very much. There is lot of symmetry and flowing layers, even if it was unintended, it works. At first I thought the dark fore-ground was rising again on the left but looking up, all other layers start rising up too, which makes them kind of flow-y. The perfectly golden fog in is perfect back drop for sky line.

    The only 2 small components that would have made me unhappy is one hot spot on middle left near hills.....too bright....cloning candidate.

    The other would be palm tree......it is sticking out on its own....breaking up the symmetry and flow for me.

    Cheers!
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