OOYCZ #4 Silhouettes

CHANDLERJA

Here are a couple of options I am working on. What do you think? Any advice?

Thanks!!


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CHANDLERJA

More options

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grandmaR

I like the first one and the last one best. (both of them are sort of families )

I don't think the cross bars behind the peacock/peahen work very well. I like that one the least

The single rooster is nice but not as interesting as the one with the hens.

kdotaylor

I like #3, the rooster, like the simplicity.

JAG

1 and 3 are great! 3 being the best of the two. In 1, the fire extinguisher distracts and should be cropped out in my opinion. Although the interaction of the two female chickens look like a fight was about to begin and the Rooster is saying "Chick fight!" lol...

Kinkajou

I agree with #3! I'd see if you can get down even lower and shoot directly from ground level to get as much of him in silhouette as possible. #4 has a lot of potential, it's unfortunate that the figures are overlapping each other otherwise it'd be a great shot!

sapphire73

I really like #3 for its simplicity and the composition. Fun to see all of them though.

CHANDLERJA

Thank you for the comments!

I've been working on another and wanted to get some opinions

Thanks!!


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jwear

I think like the comment you got on #3 ,#5 is to busy maybe just the head alone

tinamarie52

I like the rooster with the hens. I would crop out or clone out the fire extinguisher. If you are a purist, then you could make it B&W to remove the distraction of the red fire extinguisher and the green grass. My second choice is the lone rooster.

Chris

grandmaR

I actually liked the FE as it emphasized the fact that it was real not just B&W. But since I'm in the minority, I'm probably wrong. I think the one with the hens has more life t it. I don't like #5 because I find it confusing. (probably like other people find my hole in the head photo)