#4 Silhouettes

kdotaylor

any thoughts?

#1.


#2.

grandmaR

I like both of them although I think the size is a little strange (that is the dimensions). In the top one I would like to see the board which is hidden behind the wave.

With the bottom one, I looked to see if she had a suit on

JAG

nice work! #2 appeals to me better than 1. I wonder if a different crop on 1 will help the image better?

Kinkajou

I also vote for #2. Not sure if it's what you're going for, but the water does seem a little unnaturally blue to me, so I'd warm it up just a touch. If that's what you're going for, though, feel free to ignore me

grandmaR

Water color not a problem for me, but I feel the crop should be horizontal to go with the waves and the horizon.

sapphire73

I prefer #2, partly because the figure is in a more dynamic position and partly because of the wave action you captured.

kdotaylor

I've cropped the one, is this better?

#4


Also, here's another to consider. Any thoughts?

#5

red_zone

kdotaylor wrote: »

I've cropped the one, is this better?

#4

Also, here's another to consider. Any thoughts?

#5

I like the crop of #4...

#5 is interesting - I like the framing, but the colors are supersaturated, and it's a little much.

jwear

red_zone wrote: »

I like the crop of #4...

#5 is interesting - I like the framing, but the colors are supersaturated, and it's a little much.

I agree with the above , only on 4 turn turn the surfer black >

tinamarie52

your new crop is a better composition than the original. You are on the right track.

Chris

grandmaR

Yes four is better and more interesting (to me) than five which is more ordinary.

Kinkajou

#4 is my fav too

sapphire73

I also like 4 best. I think you could have left just a little more of the ocean in the bottom of the frame when cropping, but this works well.