Yesterday, out in the desert.

CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
edited April 2, 2014 in Landscapes
Criticism is always welcome.

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  • bocoboco Registered Users Posts: 710 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2014
    beetje wazig maar toch wel een mooie opname.
    grt,boco.
  • FiddlestixFiddlestix Registered Users Posts: 145 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2014
    Hi Cornflake,

    Looks like this photo was captured in the afternoon hours. Am I correct? I think this image can really benefit from some color in the mountains and that would be enhanced with some early or late sunlight giving the mountains more drama. You have a very nice sharp image here. I would have liked to see the cactus in the lower right be revealed more as the foreground element and not running off the corner of the image. I think it also would balance the large upright cactus in the left mid ground of the photo. Moving the lens to the right more would also have eliminated the partial cactus that protrudes from the bottom left.
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    Stix
  • CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2014
    Boco, thanks.

    Stix, thanks for the feedback. You make some good points. This was actually taken just as the rising sun lit the cacti.
  • GTIGTI Registered Users Posts: 8 Beginner grinner
    edited April 1, 2014
    It's a lovely, tranquil scene... I agree with stix about the foreground elements. Also, I think it might benefit from a bit more contrast...?
  • joe-bobjoe-bob Registered Users Posts: 368 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2014
    Quite nice.
  • CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2014
    GTI, joe-bob, thanks for the comments.
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,962 moderator
    edited April 2, 2014
    I like the shot. I agree with GTI about boosting the contrast--just raising the black point a bit should reduce the background haziness a bit and make the light more dramatic.
  • CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
    edited April 2, 2014
    Thanks, Richard. A version with a contrast boost.

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