Finally! A Wood Duck!
Hi Everyone,
I have seen some of the most beautiful wood duck photos on this forum--heck, fabulous duck photos period. These below don't compare to those, but I am thrilled to have them, because I have only once before gotten a chance to photograph a wood duck, and that was WAY before I met Harry, so you can imagine the quality that photo didn't have. We do have wood ducks here on Avery Island, but they are extremely skittish, and like to swim in the far reaches of a pond, and then fly off at the slightest hint of a human. All suggestions welcome and appreciated! Best to all, Pam
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I have seen some of the most beautiful wood duck photos on this forum--heck, fabulous duck photos period. These below don't compare to those, but I am thrilled to have them, because I have only once before gotten a chance to photograph a wood duck, and that was WAY before I met Harry, so you can imagine the quality that photo didn't have. We do have wood ducks here on Avery Island, but they are extremely skittish, and like to swim in the far reaches of a pond, and then fly off at the slightest hint of a human. All suggestions welcome and appreciated! Best to all, Pam
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Pentax DA 18-135 f/3.5-5.6 ED AL (IF) DC WR
Sigma !20-400 f/4.5-5.6 DG APO OS HSM
Thank you so much! And I can tell you, it didn't stay on that tree for long. Best, Pam
Nice images, Pam!
Re (minor) comments...
I wonder if cropping 1 to reduce space behind subject and above the large broken / cut branch in lower RH corner would be worth considering ... to decentralise subject a bit and get rid of the 'eye pull' respectively. Since (what appears to be) the horizon is slightly tilted, correcting this would also work to your advantage re branch end crop position?
Similar with 2 ... a crop just above the knobbly bit in bottom left would be something I'd consider ... maybe a 16:9?
Fortunately the WW2 mine in 2 is sufficiently oof to be too much of an issue
Nice job.
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Paul, I always love and appreciate your comments. In both shots the duck is standing on a tree trunk that fell over in the swamp. The left end is in the water, and the other end is leaning way over to the right, with the duck standing near the top on the right. In #1, I see what you say about moving the duck out of the center. Are you suggesting that I crop so that the duck seems to move left from the center? I think I understand what you mean about #2 and will try it. The horizon isn't actually tilted--it's just a swamp that is really OOF.
Thanks so much for taking time to help me! Best, Pam
Thanks, Mike! I really appreciate the tip about the gear. No hunters here, but you might be right about the sauce! Best, Pam
Yes.
So that the gap between the duck's tail and the LHSide edge is about half (say) of what it is now ...
+ cropping a bit off the bottom (just underneath the branch stub in left corner) to get rid of the (lighter coloured, circular) bit in lower right corner.
All I've done, btw is to move your pics around in the browser window to get some idea of how they might look if cropped... that's also why I can see that the 'horizon' (edge of swamp) in 1 is at a slightly different angle from the same feature in 2... I lined said feature up with the lower edge of the browser window
'Horizon' is probably the wrong word, but it's how I think about the same water / land interface in my own pics when correcting for tilts ... together with checking the alignment of a bird's feature and its reflection (when got a very diffused 'horizon')
Hadn't realised it was a 'swamp' ... but could see that water is present because of the bg object, together with its reflection.
Btw - I'm only rabbitting on about this 'tilt' (there's a difference between the 2 shots, albeit slight) because correcting it whilst cropping a bit off the bottom - of 1 - works to your advantage, because of the angles involved
These are only suggestions, please note.
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Okay! Got it! And thank you so much for taking time to explain, and to help me improve. Best, Pam
Paul, here is my second try at the first photo. I tried just cropping the photo, but the duck looked too big to me (it was just on the borderline of being too far for the shot when I took it), so I went back to the original and started over, moving the duck to the left. The thing that looks like a horizon line is actually a fallen tree trunk. Anyway, I like this composition better. It drives me nuts that I can't get the exposure exactly the same from one shot to the next, but such is life!
Again, thanks for your help!
Best, Pam
Eric
good gear; not enough time
Thank you so much! Best, Pam
Aha ...so I got that one wrong, big time:)
Looked like some of the banks around some of the lakes at my local venue ... when they're very oof.
Thanks for the correction, Pam.
Just out of interest, is the true 'horizon' / edge of swamp on 1 the line going just beneath the lower white section on the bird's neck?
I rarely have to contend with such substantial bits of debris ... but I have been known to clear stuff out of my line of sight by 'going fishing / dredging' with a weight on the end of a 15m length of twine I wrap around the 500's lens hood ... sometime getting odd looks, btw
I too prefer the reworked version.
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Thanks, Paul! No, the true horizon is way beyond the frame of this photo. And I REALLY appreciate your taking time to help me! It is amazing the things I don't see in my own photos that are so obvious to others!
Best, Pam