Railroad Tracks

polosoftphotopolosoftphoto Registered Users Posts: 19 Big grins
edited April 17, 2014 in Landscapes
Took this photo when out on a day with the family. Please tell me what you think and what I could have done better. Thank you for taking the time to look.

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  • CatOneCatOne Registered Users Posts: 957 Major grins
    edited April 14, 2014
    Let's try it this way:

    What do you like about the photo?

    What were you thinking when you took the photo? Were you trying to tell a story? What was that story? How would you like the viewer to feel?

    I see some things in the photo that I like, and I see some that I don't like. But it's important to know what you were thinking about before it's possible to tell whether this is a successful photograph.
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  • csndcocsndco Registered Users Posts: 2 Beginner grinner
    edited April 16, 2014
    polosoftphoto wrote: »
    Took this photo when out on a day with the family. Please tell me what you think and what I could have done better. Thank you for taking the time to look.

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  • polosoftphotopolosoftphoto Registered Users Posts: 19 Big grins
    edited April 17, 2014
    The feeling / story I was trying to get is there is more than one path... I truly enjoy photographing trains. I always wonder where is this train heading where every I take photos of a train.
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