Sobrina's Dance Recital

willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
edited May 9, 2014 in Street and Documentary
Bennington College senior dance recital


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It is better to die on you feet than to live on your knees.....Emiliano Zapata

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  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited May 1, 2014
    LOVE this one! Artistic and surreal...
    If you have the room, I'd like to see a crop that reduces the negative space
    on the left, and so, de-centers the dancer a bit - also, a bit more room above the hands would look more balanced I think.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited May 1, 2014
    Earache wrote: »
    LOVE this one! Artistic and surreal...
    If you have the room, I'd like to see a crop that reduces the negative space
    on the left, and so, de-centers the dancer a bit - also, a bit more room above the hands would look more balanced I think.

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  • willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
    edited May 1, 2014
    Concerning taste, there is no dispute. I am a fan of negative space.


    Here is my sobrina again

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    It is better to die on you feet than to live on your knees.....Emiliano Zapata
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited May 1, 2014
    Leave it alone but if you want to get picky it's to tight on Top ! mwink.gif
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  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited May 1, 2014
    ^^^ Thanks for the edit willard3.

    I think the revision is an improvement, especially the additional space above the dancer.
    I hear you and generally agree about negative space... and I think your first version has a certain quality accordingly.
    If mine, the final version would probably be in a sweet spot right between the two.
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited May 9, 2014
    It's a fine shot. I think the edit improves it but I would like to see more black at the top and less stage at the bottom. So many possibilities...mwink.gif.
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  • willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
    edited May 9, 2014
    Glad you liked this.

    I am also pleased that the only real color is her hair.
    It is better to die on you feet than to live on your knees.....Emiliano Zapata
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