Your advice --- please

D3Sshooter

Hi you'll, here I am again with a few questions but more so your opinion and view .

I was asked to shoot 25 Miss Fashion girls for their flyer (promo). It had to be (A6) format (10x14cm) with a tight crop since the picture format is that small. Not to many to colors . On the left comes the text with the girls name, SMS details and the titel Finalist Miss Fashion 2015. The shots are made and this one is an example. It is fairly bright/light (colors etc….) because they need printing (YMCK).

I would love the hear your opinion and views on it . Ugly, terrible,ok, can do, whatever you think. I still have some time to rework it.

Thanks for viewing.

Hackbone

What would look like if the bkg was all white? It might have more impact. Great shot by the way.

Jabfinger

I like it but the background seems to be a bit splotchy on the left.

Sam

Like the others the only issue I see is the background. I think you could try that graduated background that you have minus the blotchy white area or go for all white. I think all white would be easier, cleaner, and probably more consistent image to image.

Sam

puzzledpaul

I wonder if her left shoulder needs to be in frame?
If not, a crop just under her left collar bone + RHS to keep proportions looks better to me, makes her face / head bigger in frame and doesn't mess with the text area.

Prefer the graded BG - but without splodges

V. nice shot, btw.

pp

D3Sshooter

TXS everybody, what I take with me is " gradient or not but certainly do away with the splodges". Well that is good news and a bit of work….

Appreciated,

Steve