Vintage One Piece

LoganH

Hey everyone!
I have been busy with college for quite a while now. I finally got around to do an amazing shoot with a stunning woman. This woman has never modeled before. She was amazing in front of the camera!
I am doing a full series on one piece vintage swimsuits.

These are the first two images I edited. Many more to come from this session.

Comments and critiques are more than welcome!

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Qarik

the tones are not working for me in #1. The rocks are too bright, the sun on the couch, and her skin around the neck and shoulders have a weird pattern/mottle to them. Her pose is bothering me as well..she seem to upright and stiff like she was leaning against something (but she is not).

As far as #2, I like it much better. The pose and the light in general are very nice. Couple of things..the hands..her left hand is just touch too "claw" like and her right hand is pressed up to her body just touch too much..it adds tension. relax the fingers and don't show them quite so straight on. Also I would brighten up her face and hair a touch. Right now the brightest part of the image is her chest which draws the eyes away from her face.

Aleksandar Vasic

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