Not so crazy about the processing on the others - the blacks are a bit plugged up and the contrast starts to feel like an instagram or phone filter. #5 is GLORIOUS for light, posed and expression, I just feel like it's overcontrasty (on this monitor, anyway).
Love the directions you're going with your lighting!
Not so crazy about the processing on the others - the blacks are a bit plugged up and the contrast starts to feel like an instagram or phone filter. #5 is GLORIOUS for light, posed and expression, I just feel like it's overcontrasty (on this monitor, anyway).
Love the directions you're going with your lighting!
Thanks, these don't have too many edits on them, I mostly concentrated on her face so when she pics her favorites I'll make an overall edit as well.
I really like 5, but I guess for different reasons. It was overcast at sunset. I had an orange gel on off camera flash which made her orange and the background grey. Converting the RAW I cooled the temp and the gray became blue and she gained a more daytime look. I like it because it mimics a bright sunny day and I can file this trick away for family and beach weddings that may be overcast and I can try to give them the look of a bright beach day.
Good shooting, I opt for pose 1 & 5 both have that look that those pictures need . A bit teasing and playful. The models expression is superb.
2-4-6 have a bit much volume issues, 2- the low hanging breast is not that flattering , the pose and long stretched opening in the blouse amplifies that view. ( i not saying that the model is not pretty, she is).
4-The belly comes out a bit less elegant, due to the pose.
6-Massive shoulder, an effect of shooting
Liquify can help those few issues,,,, But never the less well done
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Good shooting, I opt for pose 1 & 5 both have that look that those pictures need . A bit teasing and playful. The models expression is superb.
2-4-6 have a bit much volume issues, 2- the low hanging breast is not that flattering , the pose and long stretched opening in the blouse amplifies that view. ( i not saying that the model is not pretty, she is).
4-The belly comes out a bit less elegant, due to the pose.
6-Massive shoulder, an effect of shooting
Liquify can help those few issues,,,, But never the less well done
Thanks for the detailed critiques. As a photographer I am looking a lighting ,composition etc and I want to get better at recognizing pleasing angles and poses while shooting so I can have more keepers. I overlook important small details so feedback like that is great for me.
On 2, what is the ?shadow? under her left breast? At first I thought it was a forearm, but there's no way that's her right arm. Is the shirt sheer and the yellowish area is coming from behind her thru the shirt?
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Not so crazy about the processing on the others - the blacks are a bit plugged up and the contrast starts to feel like an instagram or phone filter. #5 is GLORIOUS for light, posed and expression, I just feel like it's overcontrasty (on this monitor, anyway).
Love the directions you're going with your lighting!
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Thanks, these don't have too many edits on them, I mostly concentrated on her face so when she pics her favorites I'll make an overall edit as well.
I really like 5, but I guess for different reasons. It was overcast at sunset. I had an orange gel on off camera flash which made her orange and the background grey. Converting the RAW I cooled the temp and the gray became blue and she gained a more daytime look. I like it because it mimics a bright sunny day and I can file this trick away for family and beach weddings that may be overcast and I can try to give them the look of a bright beach day.
Thanks!
Thanks, to me she has a classic look.
Though, #4 is.. questionable to me. my first reaction was that she has quite a belly on her.
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2-4-6 have a bit much volume issues, 2- the low hanging breast is not that flattering , the pose and long stretched opening in the blouse amplifies that view. ( i not saying that the model is not pretty, she is).
4-The belly comes out a bit less elegant, due to the pose.
6-Massive shoulder, an effect of shooting
Liquify can help those few issues,,,, But never the less well done
Thanks for the detailed critiques. As a photographer I am looking a lighting ,composition etc and I want to get better at recognizing pleasing angles and poses while shooting so I can have more keepers. I overlook important small details so feedback like that is great for me.
On 2, what is the ?shadow? under her left breast? At first I thought it was a forearm, but there's no way that's her right arm. Is the shirt sheer and the yellowish area is coming from behind her thru the shirt?