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lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
edited July 28, 2014 in Street and Documentary

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  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2014
    I like the subject, lighting, setting, and the tones, a lot...
    The crop seems truncated to me, with the face pretty centered...
    Although, I am trying to think outside-the-box more often... but, it's hard to break habits.
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • BMW KurtBMW Kurt Registered Users Posts: 229 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2014
    Is this cropped? If you have more frame I would move the bike and have the rear wheel to the left of the frame. This give the bike "somewhere to go". I also would not have cropped the bottom of the bike. Basically, I would have shifted the image up and to the left.
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited July 28, 2014
    Why do I get the feeling that you didn't have a lot of time to compose the shot? rolleyes1.gif
  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2014
    Earache wrote: »
    I like the subject, lighting, setting, and the tones, a lot...
    The crop seems truncated to me, with the face pretty centered...
    Although, I am trying to think outside-the-box more often... but, it's hard to break habits.
    BMW Kurt wrote: »
    Is this cropped? If you have more frame I would move the bike and have the rear wheel to the left of the frame. This give the bike "somewhere to go". I also would not have cropped the bottom of the bike. Basically, I would have shifted the image up and to the left.
    Richard wrote: »
    Why do I get the feeling that you didn't have a lot of time to compose the shot? rolleyes1.gif


    Thank you for the feedback folks!
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