Sisters
Reflections By Brian
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This is a shoot I did with three sisters. I haven't done to many portrait shoots yet with multiple subjects, but I am hoping to get more once fall gets here. I found it tricky to balance the light and colors with the different skin tones of each of the girls. Two of them had extremely pale skin while the other had fairly dark skin, in comparison. How do you all deal with that?
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#1. That hot spot at the top is distracting. Maybe some skin smoothing is in order.
#2. Looks good. Maybe just a tad too hot.
#3. The black bracelet on her wrist is somewhat distracting. Clone it out.
#4. Again that bright spot just abover her head is distracting.
#5. Too much goop on her eye lashes. And her eyes are not the focus point...there is no focus point. The entire shot is soft.
I like the processing on the last one but I might add a slight vignette to it. Whenever the hands are close to the face have them pretend that they are resting their head on their hands as when they do it naturally it smoousches (sp) the face a bit and try to never show the back of the hand as that fattens up the hand, just not feminine.
Overall nice job on these.
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#1 is for sure the winner here. As others have mentioned. selectively darken (and maybe dessaturate) the green and bright background and that one's great. Excellent posing.
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