morcel of rust

Juano

Stumblebum

Now this can be hanging or should be hanging in a gallery somewhere!thumb

roaddog52

Cool shot. Very organic, and I really like the color combo, lines and textures.

Phil

Juano

Stumblebum wrote: »

Now this can be hanging or should be hanging in a gallery somewhere!thumb

roaddog52 wrote: »

Cool shot. Very organic, and I really like the color combo, lines and textures.

Phil

Thank you, glad you liked it!

black mamba

Well, this may be the most minimalistic rust offering I've seen lately. The term ' morsel ' is very appropriate. What really matters, though, is that this image is stronger than dirt. The little bit of rust, along with the dynamic pattern of the vines, creates a very compelling picture. Your composition, Cristóbal, is spot on. The contrast in colors also contributes to the making of a really powerful image. Well done, my man.

Tom

Juano

Thank you for your kind words as usual Tom.

My apologies for misspelling "morsel". I am not sure why you can't go into the "edit" mode and correct the title of a thread.

lifeinfocus

Like the lines, contrast in colors and layout of the composition. I hope you don't mind but I think the rust area takes away from the image.

Phil

Juano

lifeinfocus wrote: »

Like the lines, contrast in colors and layout of the composition. I hope you don't mind but I think the rust area takes away from the image.

Phil

Thanks for the comment Phil! This is what Dgrin is all about, the exchange of opinions and constructive criticism. I'm not sure on this one there's something in the composition that bugs me, without the rusted part it looks too simple, with it it looks somewhat unbalanced.

Earache

Really like this one Cristóbal... just the way it is...
I like the dotted lines of the missing vines - very different - and I like the rust patch/bolt as an incongruous focal point.
I dunno -I think it all works well!

Juano

Earache wrote: »

Really like this one Cristóbal... just the way it is...
I like the dotted lines of the missing vines - very different - and I like the rust patch/bolt as an incongruous focal point.
I dunno -I think it all works well!

Thanks! I too like the dotted lines. Glad to hear that you think it works.

rwells

I think that your own description is spot on, and is also why this image is successful.

"...I'm not sure on this one there's something in the composition that bugs me, without the rusted part it looks too simple, with it it looks somewhat unbalanced."

Good job

Juano

rwells wrote: »

I think that your own description is spot on, and is also why this image is successful.

"...I'm not sure on this one there's something in the composition that bugs me, without the rusted part it looks too simple, with it it looks somewhat unbalanced."

Good job

Thanks Randy.

DonRicklin

rwells wrote: »

I think that your own description is spot on, and is also why this image is successful.

"...I'm not sure on this one there's something in the composition that bugs me, without the rusted part it looks too simple, with it it looks somewhat unbalanced."

Good job

I am in full agreement on Randy's position here!



Don

Juano

DonRicklin wrote: »

I am in full agreement on Randy's position here!



Don

It's one of those "cursed if you do, cursed if you don't"...