Tetons, Sept. 2014
PrevailingConditions
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OK, stepping out of lurk mode once again
I was able to spend a few hours (Friday afternoon and Saturday morning) a week or so ago up at the Tetons in Wyoming. At that time the leaves were just turning but it should be prime time right now. I had very clear skies which made Milky Way shots good, but not so good for daytime shots (I don't really like clear blue skies for photography - too boring).
Thanks,
Mike
Here are the shots:
#1
#2
#3
#4
#5
I was able to spend a few hours (Friday afternoon and Saturday morning) a week or so ago up at the Tetons in Wyoming. At that time the leaves were just turning but it should be prime time right now. I had very clear skies which made Milky Way shots good, but not so good for daytime shots (I don't really like clear blue skies for photography - too boring).
Thanks,
Mike
Here are the shots:
#1
#2
#3
#4
#5
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Really like all! Luke warm on #2. Cheers!
Sam
grt,boco.
Stumblebum, I too am less thrilled about the second but I probably have more sympathy because of the cost of taking it. I took it very early in the morning while it was still quite dark and 23 degrees (-5 Celsius). It was a pain focusing and I didn't notice the ugly tree on the left. Plus I was hearing animals rutting around me (probably elk) which was a little distracting. Regardless, it was still nice being outside and taking pictures. I'm hoping to get back here in December when I can spend more time.
Mike
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How long was the exposure in #2 to punch up the stars this way? I can see some streaks at the bottom of #5, so I assume it was minutes, rather than seconds.
My real question here is: were you going for wilderness or tranquility? I guess, tranquility, thus the longer exposure and smoothed out water. #4 is a great shot, but the intent and the subsequent technique make it a little sterile.
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The exposure in #2 was 15 seconds at f/2.8 and ISO 3200. #5 was 30s, f/2.8 and ISO 6400.
What would you suggest to make #4 less sterile?
Thanks,
Mike
I welcome your feedback, but leave the editing to me - thanks!
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The photo is even and perfectly balanced, with the prevailing satin-feel throughout. The more I look at it -- the more I think there really are two pictures in it: the boats on the right, four of them, if cropped into a square, or an 8 x 10 landscape stand on their own (with some cloning out pieces of the jetty); and I'd also shift the horizon to the very top, like crop it from top at the first sign of blue. this would give the sense of depth and distance, and I wouldn't want to ruin that. 4 times more water than sky, something like that.
The left side is already unbalanced by the mountains, the reflection and that brown looking thing at the left margin (that I don't particularly care for). If you want to keep this composition whole, but simply less sterile, I'd throw a pebble into the water before I shoot, and then shoot rather fast, 1/500 or so. But any prop would do, really, anything that keeps it slightly off kilt.
All these are technicalities to taste, quite a personal thing. The decision of what it is you want to tell me by this image is yours. Assuming you wanted to relate your experience of being there -- what was that experience? Wonder? Calm? Desolation? Only you can answer that, and I suspect the answer will guide your hand just right, even after the fact. What do you think?
Cheers,
Alex
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No problem - this is all for fun anyway and I'm sure we've all fallen into similar situations.
Thanks for commenting.
Mike
I welcome your feedback, but leave the editing to me - thanks!
A happy coincidence of conditions. Unfortunately, I haven't had the chance to return in the last few years. I'd love to get back there. It's an amazing place.
Mike
I welcome your feedback, but leave the editing to me - thanks!
Thanks for the thoughtful comments. I have a few other compositions from this area and I'll have to see what I come up with. A pebble would not have worked too well, this was a 6s exposure and it would have just contributed blur.
Mike
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-Len
Thanks Len. I'm glad you like them.
Mike
I welcome your feedback, but leave the editing to me - thanks!
Thanks,
Mike
I welcome your feedback, but leave the editing to me - thanks!
I agree, wonderful stuff.
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Phil
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