Navel Ring

atomicjade

Although I feel I could've done a better job with this, I'm not sure exactly how.. could anybody give me some advice?




thanks!

DanielB

atomicjade wrote:

Although I feel I could've done a better job with this, I'm not sure exactly how.. could anybody give me some advice?
thanks!

first off. i see this photo as a very "sensual" feeling mood. sooo i think i like the lighting on it. the DOF could use some tweeking. and *this might just be me and looking for a flaw* but it ruins the feel of the picure when there are some hairs sticking up in front of it. lol.


just my .02

MotoKat

DanielB wrote:

first off. i see this photo as a very "sensual" feeling mood. sooo i think i like the lighting on it. the DOF could use some tweeking. and *this might just be me and looking for a flaw* but it ruins the feel of the picure when there are some hairs sticking up in front of it. lol.


just my .02

I was thinking the same thing about the hairs.:D

DavidTO

Nice shot that's ruined by the over saturation and heavy yellow cast, IMO.

Frog Lady

upside down?
Interesting shot, but I think the dangly thingy should be on the bottom of the picture; IMO, it looks odd at the top

I also agree w/ Daniel about the DOF, I think more of the navel pin and stuff should be in focus.

is this a self "portrait"?

wxwax

Nice idea. I reckon the white balance is way off. You'll want to do a custom white balance for indoor lighting like that. The composition isn't really working either. And I agree about the hairs, they don't fit the mood of the shot.