Concept - speed

amitg

Please tell me your comments. Both positive and negative. I am a amateur photographer and will really appreciate all the help. thanks

Amit


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boco

mooi shot hoor.
zou alleen dat lichte witte stukje tegen het kader rechtsboven wegwerken.
grt,boco.

Cavalier

From another amateur................................

Great shot

amitg

Cavalier wrote: »

From another amateur................................

Great shot

Thanks !!!

karloznz

I am really liking this photography - its is very effective in many aspects. The only comment I would make on an improvement is the right hand foreground is distracting me a little.

amitg

karloznz wrote: »

I am really liking this photography - its is very effective in many aspects. The only comment I would make on an improvement is the right hand foreground is distracting me a little.

Thanks !!! I Will try to get the next shot without the part of platform to compare.

amitg

boco wrote: »

mooi shot hoor.
zou alleen dat lichte witte stukje tegen het kader rechtsboven wegwerken.
grt,boco.

Thanks. I will try the next shot with the modification you recommend.

roaddog52

A great concept. I have done some work similar to this. We know it's a train, but try catching a couple of images with the front of the train in the composition. It will still be blurred and give us the sense of speed and motion, but it will be defined a little better as a train also. I also agree with boco regarding the bright white light in the upper right corner being a bit of a distraction. Again, great work and congrats for getting out and experimenting. thumb

Phil

kdog

Well, done. The foreground doesn't bother me, but you could crop a bit off the bottom I suppose. Just a thought, but if you do this shot again, you could consider using a flash and second curtain synch. If done right, you'll have a sharp image of the front of the train (or the back) and trailing blur.