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D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
edited December 12, 2014 in People
Trying to create some atmosphere with some extra PP
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  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2014
    This is GORGEOUS D3. Model, expression, lighting, treatment all 10+.

    Very few models can pull off this "flat to the camera" lookback. This one can.

    Question though: Why the blur off her (camera right) hip and lower reins??
    Bilsen (the artist formerly known as John Galt NY)
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  • SeefutlungSeefutlung Registered Users Posts: 2,781 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2014
    Nice atmosphere. :) I do like the tones and overall processing. Usually I'm not a fan of the fake-film-dirty-scratched negative look, but it works here.
    My snaps can be found here:
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  • jonh68jonh68 Registered Users Posts: 2,711 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2014
  • alaiosalaios Registered Users Posts: 668 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2014
    very very good job.
  • jmphotocraftjmphotocraft Registered Users Posts: 2,987 Major grins
    edited December 12, 2014
    Hot pose. The color/tone difference of her back compared to her legs bothers me, and her legs have obviously been over-smoothed. Most of the picture is gritty and old-timey, but her torso, butt, and head are pin sharp and clean so they don't quite sell it for me. The hay bail (or frosted mini-wheat?) in the lower left is so blurred that it appears closer to the camera, but are we supposed to believe her hand is resting on it? That's not working for me either. Otherwise great shot with loads of potential.
    -Jack

    An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
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