Step up to Rust

redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
edited December 23, 2014 in Other Cool Shots
A bit of PS adventure while watching the Spurs game.

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"But ask the animals, and they will teach you." (Job 12:7)

Lauren Blackwell
www.redleashphoto.com

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  • rwellsrwells Registered Users Posts: 6,084 Major grins
    edited December 15, 2014
    Your stepping into it now Lauren! You'd better go get your tetanus shot...


    BTW, Great comp thumb.gif
    Randy
  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited December 16, 2014
    This is absolutely wonderful!! MOMA stuff!
  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,327 Major grins
    edited December 16, 2014
    Wonderful shot, Lauren. I might opt for a tad more overall luminance....something to make the stairs " pop " a little more against the brick background. As Randy noted, the composition is great. Well seen and captured.

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
  • DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited December 16, 2014
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    Love this image! :D

    Don
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  • willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
    edited December 16, 2014
    Wonderful composition.
    It is better to die on you feet than to live on your knees.....Emiliano Zapata
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,891 Major grins
    edited December 16, 2014
    Very nice shot! I like the geometry of the composition, I wonder if a square crop would work though. Not sure.
    Cristóbal


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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited December 16, 2014
    Oh now I get it rolleyes1.gif
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  • DogdotsDogdots Registered Users Posts: 8,795 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2014
    Great work thumb.gif
    Mary
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  • redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2014
    Here are some revisions. What do you Rustafarians think?

    1.
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    2.
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    3.
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    "But ask the animals, and they will teach you." (Job 12:7)

    Lauren Blackwell
    www.redleashphoto.com
  • DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2014
    What else can be said, but "Right On" and keep 'em coming! thumb.gif

    Don
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  • redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2014
    Thanks, Don!
    "But ask the animals, and they will teach you." (Job 12:7)

    Lauren Blackwell
    www.redleashphoto.com
  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,327 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2014
    I'll go with the first revision. I like the darker background brick wall and you did a superb job in adding " pop " to the stairs. I never interpreted this as an exercise in rustology ( new made-up word ) but rather one with an emphasis on geometry. The increased pop in the stairs was the spark that brought it home for me. Good job.

    Take care,

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
  • redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2014
    THanks, Tom. The first revision is my preference also. I just kept playing with the PS layer blends until I found versions I liked. Thanks for looking in.

    Merry Christmas!
    Lauren
    "But ask the animals, and they will teach you." (Job 12:7)

    Lauren Blackwell
    www.redleashphoto.com
  • PantherPanther Registered Users Posts: 3,658 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2014
    Howdy Lauren,

    I agree, I like your Original Version as well.
    Take care,

    Craig

    Burleson, Texas
  • rwellsrwells Registered Users Posts: 6,084 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2014
    First revision for me too!

    Keep up the good work...
    Randy
  • redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
    edited December 23, 2014
    Thanks, everyone!
    "But ask the animals, and they will teach you." (Job 12:7)

    Lauren Blackwell
    www.redleashphoto.com
  • CavalierCavalier Registered Users Posts: 3,080 Major grins
    edited December 23, 2014
    Love 'em all!
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  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited December 23, 2014
    Hi Lauren,
    I'm a lovin' rev. #1... and #3 for the extra grunge!
    Eric ~ Smugmug
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