Pre-teen portrait session

MarcRaymond

A few favorites from a recent session with this wonderful young lady. C&C appreciated...

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M38A1

I'm going with #3 as my favorite. Everything just seems to 'work' and work well with it.

Hackbone

Like #1 but try to keep the hair behind the eye socket to keep the shadow off the eye.

2. Has some crazy distortion between the head and lower body.

3 is very cute

4 to much negative space behind the subject, for me I need more room in front.

5 awkard head, shoulder, arm angle

Just my nits so take it with a grain of salt. What a cutie!!!!

MarcRaymond

M38A1 wrote: »

I'm going with #3 as my favorite. Everything just seems to 'work' and work well with it.

thank you

MarcRaymond

Hackbone wrote: »

Like #1 but try to keep the hair behind the eye socket to keep the shadow off the eye.

2. Has some crazy distortion between the head and lower body.

3 is very cute

4 to much negative space behind the subject, for me I need more room in front.

5 awkard head, shoulder, arm angle

Just my nits so take it with a grain of salt. What a cutie!!!!

thanks for the critique....regarding #4, would you have done just a tight portrait headshot?

Hackbone

I like 4 but for me the head turn is too severe for my liking and it makes the head appear odd.
Your colors are just super for my tastes by the way.