Blue oceans - Green Hills - Spring Sunset
Stumblebum
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Bit ahead of schedule....but catch the spring while you can! All criticism heartily cherished and greatly appreciated!
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I'm not worthy...
Thanks kindly Wayne!
I have visited your area once.....for checking out historical sites....Mt. Vernon et. al.
It truly was amazing!
My comment then was, no wonder they didn't want to relinquish this place to British!:D
Cheers!
Take care, my friend,
Tom
Thank you Tom!
Miss your posts!
I hope the 'Halt in Production' ends!
The 'barns' in spring must be calling out your name to be captured!!!
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Thanks much FlyNavy! Really appreciate it!
I think #2 would be significantly stronger if you nuked whatever it is far left on horizon line. It pulls too much attention away.
#5 seems to be calling for a bw conversion attempt.
#8 could be improved as well with some masking or selecting. Blacks are too dark in the main tree and both the sky & foreground could be enhanced to create more drama as well as more balance.
Overall a very nice set of images. You have had some great outings in the past few months.
Aaron Newman
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Thanks kindly Aaron! All points noted and will work on them! Hope you come over here sometime and we all go shooting!
My only quibble would be the halos in the high contrast areas of some shots and the blown out sky in 10.
Are these down in the south bay/Morgan Hill area? A friend of mine was saying the wild flowers at Sunol were blooming nicely.
Mike
I welcome your feedback, but leave the editing to me - thanks!
Thanks Mike! I hope we get few more interesting weather days! Thanks much for tip on Sunol! I have to check it out. They have a waterfall known as Little Yosemite as well. The Green Hills are actually taken close to Joseph D. Grant park. About 3.4 miles further from entrance there is Twin Gates trail head. One of my favorite places to hang out. Half hour from my home. I will look at #10. Pointing camera at sun comes at a price.......have to stack more filters! ;o) Cheers!
Yes, Sunol is closer to my neck of the woods. The waterfall at Little Yosemite isn't too big and flows best immediately after rain. You'll have better luck at Uvas Canyon or Big Basin in the Santa Cruz hills.
Mike
I welcome your feedback, but leave the editing to me - thanks!
"You miss 100% of the shots you don't take" - Wayne Gretzky
Many thanks David!!
Hi Aaron, below are my attempted improvements! Thanks much for your help!
Love the wildflower shots. #8 would be amazing if you hadn't blown out the sky so much near the center. That would have been a perfect candidate for an exposure blend. Regardless, this is really a fine set.
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Phil
Luck happens when preparation meets opportunity!
Phil
"You don't take a photograph, you make it." ~Ansel Adams
Phil
I am ready for the lesson maestro! Did call you but you had some stuff....if this kind of weather and your free day (truly free day) align, would appreciate your help! Thanks for everything!
Many thanks Phil! This is kind of scenery that you probably see a lot off in your neck of the woods!
Thank you kindly Phil! The #6 had more warm light as well as sun had broken through. Wanted to do more but couldn't get a bearing at that time! Hope to see you post more! Cheers!
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Sam
Thank you Awais! Much appreciate it!
The ocean shots are towards Santa Cruz, CA.
The green hills are San Jose, CA and Oroville CA.
We have drought but got enough rain that for now hills are green....
Soon they will turn to gold.
Cheers!
Many thanks Sam!
The green hills require bit of huffing and puffing.....
If with lighter amount of gear, you are up for it....let me know!
Cheers!
Cheers, Richard.
Thank you Mike!!