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JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
edited April 15, 2015 in Street and Documentary

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  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited April 11, 2015
    Interesting subject and moment Cristóbal... but the oof foreground bugs me on this one - that's just me though...
    Also, is it a bit underexposed?
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2015
    thanks Eric, I think you are right, I will try to boost the exposure a bit.
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2015
    Here is a brighter version (also straighter...)

    DSC_0849-001-XL.jpg
  • lensmolelensmole Registered Users Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2015
    Juano wrote: »
    DSC_0849-X2.jpg

    I like this shot and the foreground adds to the composition. An increase in exposure does not improve anything IMHO.
  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2015
    Juano wrote: »
    Here is a brighter version (also straighter...)

    DSC_0849-001-XL.jpg
    Very much better I think Cristóbal!
    The lifted shadows emphasize the whiter shirt and face and are tonally different from the foreground
    such that I don't have any problem with it now. thumb.gif
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2015
    Thanks for the comments Lensmole and Eric. I really like this one and your comments helped improve it.
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited April 14, 2015
    I think the brighter version is an improvement. thumb.gif
  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,323 Major grins
    edited April 14, 2015
    As you do, Cristóbal, I find this shot appealing. It's a bit of a strange scene and the partial obscurity of the subject enhances its allure. Job well done, my friend. thumb.gif

    Take care,

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
    edited April 14, 2015
    Thanks Tom and Richard. As I said there's something about this shot that appeals to me, I like the complete concentration even in a busy surrounding. I think that the face on the back of the mirror gives this shot a retro feel as well.
  • CCoopCCoop Registered Users Posts: 511 Major grins
    edited April 14, 2015
    Nice. I like this a lot.


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  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
    edited April 15, 2015
    CCoop wrote: »
    Nice. I like this a lot.


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    Thanks! :D
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