Two from brick kiln

Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,575 Major grins
edited May 22, 2015 in Street and Documentary
1: Child of worker, his father called him to pose for my camera but he was not in mood :D
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2:
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  • David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,313 moderator
    edited May 19, 2015
    Lovely photos, Awais. #2 is very good. Just a suggestion: both appear a bit too dark on my monitor.
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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,575 Major grins
    edited May 20, 2015
    David_S85 wrote: »
    Lovely photos, Awais. #2 is very good. Just a suggestion: both appear a bit too dark on my monitor.

    Thanks David, probably i messed brightness of my monitor will check
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  • ThelensspotThelensspot Registered Users Posts: 2,041 Major grins
    edited May 20, 2015
    #2 I really like but more light as David suggested.
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 20,012 moderator
    edited May 22, 2015
    #1 feels a little too far from the kid, though I do like the lone tree in the background. #2 is better--I like the light. Brightness looks OK to me, ne_nau.gif.
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  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited May 22, 2015
    Well done as always!!
    I assume #1 has a longer view to show the brick drying operation also... the tree is a great element!

    Both appear somewhat underexposed to me also...
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