Wheels of Time

bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
edited July 30, 2015 in Other Cool Shots
Montezuma Hills near Rio Vista, CA.
c&c always welcome
-Len

WheelsOfTime-XL.jpg
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  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited July 27, 2015
    Beautiful comp and exposure Len! I however so wish that the transition between grass and hill was soft. This hard line is kind of creating a split frame. Not end of the world.....still beautiful! Cheers!
  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,325 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2015
    I love this one for the contrast between old technology and new technology. Well done.

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
  • bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2015
    Stumblebum wrote: »
    Beautiful comp and exposure Len! I however so wish that the transition between grass and hill was soft. This hard line is kind of creating a split frame. Not end of the world.....still beautiful! Cheers!

    Thanks Taz. Not much choice re the split line as I couldn't get closer (fence) to the wagon and to back off would leave alot of empty forground.
    -Best
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  • bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2015
    black mamba wrote: »
    I love this one for the contrast between old technology and new technology. Well done.

    Tom

    Thanks Tom..... I loved the contrast also.
    -Len
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  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2015
    bristlecone wrote: »
    Thanks Taz. Not much choice re the split line as I couldn't get closer (fence) to the wagon and to back off would leave alot of empty forground.
    -Best

    Now that Tom has pointed out an angle that I completely missed, new vs. old tech, perhaps the more solid split works!
  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2015
    Good grab... well treated
    Rags
  • ThelensspotThelensspot Registered Users Posts: 2,041 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2015
    I think you captured the contrast of new vs old technology very nicely. Good eye! B&W is perfect here.
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,968 moderator
    edited July 29, 2015
    I like the framing and juxtaposition. Nicely seen and composed. I wonder if it would be possible to make the wagon stand out a bit more from the background. Not too sure how to do that without an insane amount of work. What does it look like in color? headscratch.gif
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  • willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2015
    The b&w complements the contrast between old and new.

    Well done.
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  • CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2015
    Terrific shot. I know what Richard means but I liked the fact that my eye was drawn to the top and I didn't notice the wagon for a second.
    Don
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  • bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2015
    torags wrote: »
    Good grab... well treated

    Thanks for looking Rags...
    -Len
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  • bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2015
    Thelensspot wrote: »
    I think you captured the contrast of new vs old technology very nicely. Good eye! B&W is perfect here.

    Thanks Wayne, I appreciate your comments.
    -Len
    http://lamiller.smugmug.com
  • bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2015
    Richard wrote: »
    I like the framing and juxtaposition. Nicely seen and composed. I wonder if it would be possible to make the wagon stand out a bit more from the background. Not too sure how to do that without an insane amount of work. What does it look like in color? headscratch.gif

    Thanks guys, (Richard, Willard & Don). I see what you mean re the wagon and it's background. Regarding color, I believe this image has much more contrast and impact as a bw. I'll work on the wagon background.
    -Len
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  • bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2015
    Here is an adjustment: A little more foreground space; lightening of foreground; less sharpening; somewhat less contrast in foreground. Let me know what you all think, and thanks for the suggestions.
    Best, -Len


    WheelsOfTime_4-XL.jpg
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  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited July 30, 2015
    I love the rework!
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,968 moderator
    edited July 30, 2015
    Stumblebum wrote: »
    I love the rework!
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  • bristleconebristlecone Registered Users Posts: 451 Major grins
    edited July 30, 2015
    Thanks Taz & Richard. I like the rework too.
    -Len
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