Playful Kellie

Bilsen

Yesterday she was Rocker Chick. At the end of the shoot we went a different way and she showed her playful sexy side.



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4.not a lot of the models I shoot can pull off the "bite the lip" thing like Kellie.


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6. Same pose, three expressions, pick your favorite.


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jmphotocraft

For some reason I can only see 4 out of the 9 pics.

Not that I am a master, far from it, and I don't even do this genre, but I'm going to be honest here. I am all for admiring hot chicks for their looks, but she's just not doing it for me in these pics, and she should. I think you did a pretty good job on the technical stuff, although the bg is still a bit harsh. I think the posing is a big part of the problem for me, and I feel like I often think this about your shots. If you're the one coaching your subjects on posing, I think you've risen to the level of your own incompetence. I think it may be time to either do some serious studying or get someone else to step in to handle the posing. Maybe I'm way off but I'm just being honest here.

I loved 9 until I saw the cloning artifacts and the hiked up dress. IMO, totally unnecessary and trashy. If you want that shot to work, you're going to have to help her out with some photoshop on the skin and the extra bulge below her buttock.

Bilsen

So then shall I put you down as "undecided".

Seriously JMP thanks for commenting.

michaelglenn

Overall nice set! I'm just going to critique it from how I see it. The majority of images are showing her natural beauty which I appreciate, but then images 5,6, and 7 she is just grabbing her dress in way that says, "Hey guys! Stare at my butt!" And to be honest, it doesn't do it for me. We know she is sexy and there are ways to achieve that naturally which you have shown in the other images above. Just my two cents

Bilsen

Thanks Michael.

Some likes the flirty stuff, some doesn't. As long as the technical are solid I enjoy the differences in what people like.