clocks

dragandjordjevicdragandjordjevic Registered Users Posts: 188 Major grins
edited October 25, 2015 in Street and Documentary

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  • JuanoJuano Registered Users Posts: 4,890 Major grins
    edited October 18, 2015
    I like this! The only distraction is the lightbulb, but there's not much you can do. Nice processing too.
  • dragandjordjevicdragandjordjevic Registered Users Posts: 188 Major grins
    edited October 18, 2015
    Yeah that bulb... bothers me too, but not much i could do about it... ty
  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited October 18, 2015
    Try cropping it out by keeping the aspect ratio and taking off from the top and the left. Clocks will be closer and the guy in the background will be more noticed.
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited October 18, 2015
    rainbow wrote: »
    Try cropping it out by keeping the aspect ratio and taking off from the top and the left. Clocks will be closer and the guy in the background will be more noticed.
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  • dragandjordjevicdragandjordjevic Registered Users Posts: 188 Major grins
    edited October 18, 2015
    muchas gracias
  • ziggy53ziggy53 Super Moderators Posts: 24,125 moderator
    edited October 25, 2015
    Actually, I like this image very much just how it is.

    All in all I think that this image tells a very nice visual story. Sure, the eye bounces around for a bit, first at the bare bulb and then to the dark regions of the display board to the left and the dark shirt, but then the human face and hands become apparent creating a small "surprise".

    By all means do the suggested crop, but I bet it just makes a different statement and, therefore, a different type of image, without diminishing the value of this image as it is.
    ziggy53
    Moderator of the Cameras and Accessories forums
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