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A window at Tempe Center for the Arts

CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
edited October 29, 2015 in Other Cool Shots
Criticism is welcome.

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Don
Gallery: http://cornflakeaz.smugmug.com/

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    ThelensspotThelensspot Registered Users Posts: 2,041 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2015
    Beautiful lines and colors!
    "Photography is partly art and partly science. Really good photography adds discipline, sacrifice and a never ending pursuit of photographic excellence"...ziggy53

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    toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2015
    Nice geometrics

    Well seen
    Rags
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    black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,321 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2015
    I really like this shot. I'm torn, however, in my reaction to the " intruding " angled bars on the right. On one hand I feel that they're a terrific bump to drama and tension that benefits the picture....on the other hand, they're a huge distraction to an otherwise cohesive scene. As I said, I really like this shot.

    For fun, I cropped out from the right to completely eliminate the " intruders ". I also cropped from the top to eliminate the first horizontal row. I found that image to be equally appealing.

    Great work.clap.gif

    Tom
    I always wanted to lie naked on a bearskin rug in front of a fireplace. Cracker Barrel didn't take kindly to it.
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    CCoopCCoop Registered Users Posts: 511 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2015
    "Technological!" This picture casts a spell on me, and I like it! As for the disorienting beams on the right ... love this. Brings me right to the threshold of a seizure! LOVE IT! --Carter
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    EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2015
    Very cool!!
    Eric ~ Smugmug
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    CornflakeCornflake Registered Users Posts: 3,346 Major grins
    edited October 25, 2015
    Thanks very much for the comments. To me, the bars on the right were needed to keep the image from being too flat and static, but I can understand Tom's reactions.

    I really liked this. I thought it would get a big yawn from everyone else. You never know.
    Don
    Gallery: http://cornflakeaz.smugmug.com/
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    StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited October 25, 2015
    Very interesting! Attention grabbing!
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    RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,929 moderator
    edited October 29, 2015
    Cornflake wrote: »
    To me, the bars on the right were needed to keep the image from being too flat and static...
    nod.gif Color and texture could carry it alone, but the bars add depth. thumb.gif
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    David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,191 moderator
    edited October 29, 2015
    Great techno-abstract. Nicely seen.
    My Smugmug
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