Try to get more light into the eye sockets. Drop the main a tad and swing the main more toward the camera to light the far eye a tad. Good exposure but you have the hands lit equal to the face which pulls your attention from the face. Try to gobo the light or do some exposure correction on the hands.
Thanks Charles, somebody in another forum also advised I drop the main... it was about a meter above me. Good tip on the hands lighting. I appreciate your help
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