Retro jackets and models

D3Sshooter

Here is another from the set for the catalogue, followed by the ladies section in color.

Cygnus Studios

The first shot is darn near perfect as an image. Appears more editorial than catalog, but well done. The only small negative is the models left hand. I can't quite see what he is holding (if anything) but his hand has a bit of a claw shape which is a little distracting to my eye.

So many commercial options for that image going well beyond just the jacket, so well done.

The second shot is very catalog in style. The lighting is just a smidge flat on the jacket but not overly so. The one bright spot on the leading edge of the tank and spilling onto the headlight is drawing the eye a bit.

Bryce Wilson

Not so sure those jackets are "retro", but I really like number one. Personally, I wish that white blob/object in the background, behind the handlebar, wasn't there.

puzzledpaul

Agree with the comments of previous posters ... both + and -.
An additional minus (for me) - easily rectified? - is that I think the window in 2 could be aligned a bit better with frame edges?

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Cavalier

Oh I rather think the first one is for the Ladies section!

D3Sshooter

Cavalier wrote: »

Oh I rather think the first one is for the Ladies section!

Yep, I think so Jo

The Leader

I love retro images and those are pretty good so well done!

michaelglenn

I love this look!

Sam

I am getting sick of seeing your fantastic, perfect, unmatchable photography!!!

I am going to the Golden Gate Bridge this afternoon with all my camera gear and am going to jump off and end my agony.

Sam

Cavalier

Oh wait Sam..............don't do it - wait :uhoh !!

I'll meet you at the north end of the bridge and hold all your camera gear for you. :heh:heh

Sam

Cavalier wrote: »

Oh wait Sam..............don't do it - wait :uhoh !!

I'll meet you at the north end of the bridge and hold all your camera gear for you. :heh:heh

I'm glad someone cares. :cry

Sam

kdotaylor

These are really nice...I love the darker light, just right--not too dark. Perfect!

jmphotocraft

Great lighting in both. Love the first one. The second one doesn't work for me because of her round baby face, and her messed up hair. It shouldn't be so windy inside a garage.