Rainbow Air
Thusie
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I was trying for this sort of. Actually I was going for some nice rays and muffed that ended up with this and thought with a bit of PP help it might just be interesting. What do you think?
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a couple little things that stuck out to me were that the sky is overexposed enough that it seems there is some purple fringing around many branches, which may be tough to fix. On the left side of the rays there seems like a reflection of 'someone', maybe it's just some round reflections, but it even badly distorted one of your trees. There is also a round one to the right of the rays too. i believe those detract from those strong angled lines of your rays. Again, that may be tough to fix also. If it's the idea you're looking for an opinion on, I can definitely see where you're coming from. Without air we wouldn't see rays!
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You are right there is quite a bit wrong with that shot that probably isn't fixable. Could I do it again? Probably not since I'm not quite sure how it happened in the first place (except it is pretty over exposed):D I liked the colors so gave it a try. Yea the PF around the trees is nasty.
Don't know if you are using a polarising filter. Would that make any difference to how the sky holds? - looks questionly at the pros .
Maybe a lower angle to give some dynamics to the actual picture or something that the rays are highlighting or picking out to give a focus.
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Off to try and duplicate what you did, thanks.