Melancholic landscape (B&W)

NibblerNibbler Registered Users Posts: 84 Big grins
edited August 31, 2016 in Landscapes
Bit carried away with PhotoShop and NIK software :)

landscape_lansi_musta_web.jpg

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  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited August 30, 2016
    Appealing...
  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited August 30, 2016
    Stumblebum wrote: »
    Appealing...

    I agree... I really like the mood, sky, building, and boats - very nice conversion too.
    But, to my eye, I found myself wishing you had stepped just over the fence...
    It has a nice leading line, but seems incongruous with the mid and background scene and is very (too?) prominent... jmo - Cheers!
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited August 30, 2016
    Agree Eric......felt bit of forced comp.....but me not know such words as "incongruous".:Dthumb.gif
  • EaracheEarache Registered Users Posts: 3,533 Major grins
    edited August 30, 2016
    Stumblebum wrote: »
    Agree Eric......felt bit of forced comp.....but me not know such words as "incongruous".:Dthumb.gif
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    My Grandma - bless her - always told me to, "look it up" (uhhh... this was before the interwebz)... so, i'll blame her for how I am. :Dthumb.gif
    Eric ~ Smugmug
  • David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,313 moderator
    edited August 30, 2016
    Agree with the others. The wrecked boats and the old building are the subjects in this scene. The new, and dominating fence, is just a distraction. I would get closer to the boats and shoot up the hill. That, or get much farther back and shoot this again with a longer lens -- (possibly with the fence?) -- but the fence could be de-emphasized.
    My Smugmug
    "You miss 100% of the shots you don't take" - Wayne Gretzky
  • NibblerNibbler Registered Users Posts: 84 Big grins
    edited August 31, 2016
    Thank you all. I really appreciate your comments and feedback!
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