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jmphotocraftjmphotocraft Registered Users Posts: 2,987 Major grins
edited November 15, 2016 in Landscapes
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-Jack

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  • roaddog52roaddog52 Registered Users Posts: 1,323 Major grins
    edited November 12, 2016
    Nice twilight capture thumb.gifthumb. I like the way the foreground and the tree keeps our view focused on the boats and the horizon.
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  • David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,313 moderator
    edited November 13, 2016
    Great mood in this one. The foliage on the left of the tree trunk kinda leads my eye to the left rather than to the right.
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  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited November 13, 2016
    Very nice!
  • jmphotocraftjmphotocraft Registered Users Posts: 2,987 Major grins
    edited November 14, 2016
    David_S85 wrote: »
    Great mood in this one. The foliage on the left of the tree trunk kinda leads my eye to the left rather than to the right.

    Thanks, are you suggesting a crop? I thought the tree needed a little "breathing room" on the left there, no?
    -Jack

    An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited November 14, 2016
    I like what you have here. I agree a little crop could help.
    Aaron Nelson
  • JonaBeth RussellJonaBeth Russell Registered Users Posts: 1,065 Major grins
    edited November 14, 2016
    Great capture! I too would like to see the left side cropped to eliminate the space left of the tree.
  • roaddog52roaddog52 Registered Users Posts: 1,323 Major grins
    edited November 14, 2016
    My personal thought is that the curve of the shore and the curve of the tree keeps me pulled into the center. A small crop off of the left side might make a stronger comp, but I think you need some sky on the left to make the silhouette work (imho). Maybe crop to the edge of the rounded shaped tree coming out of the left side.
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  • EiaEia Registered Users Posts: 3,627 Major grins
    edited November 14, 2016
    Indeed - the tree canopy is a wonderful frame for the elements below. the colors are terrific!
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  • David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,313 moderator
    edited November 14, 2016
    jmphotocraft wrote: »
    Thanks, are you suggesting a crop? I thought the tree needed a little "breathing room" on the left there, no?

    I was. And you are right, the tree does need some breathing room, though I thought I'd give it a go, if you don't mind me posting this. I can take this down if you'd like.

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  • jmphotocraftjmphotocraft Registered Users Posts: 2,987 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2016
    David, I don't mind, thanks for taking the time. I'm of the opinion that anything online without a watermark or copyright mark is public domain. But I couldn't really "see" it with just that yellow outline. So how's this?

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    -Jack

    An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
  • roaddog52roaddog52 Registered Users Posts: 1,323 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2016
    thumb.gifthumb
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  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2016
    Good!
    Aaron Nelson
  • David_S85David_S85 Administrators Posts: 13,313 moderator
    edited November 15, 2016
    I like that version better, Jack. :D
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  • jmphotocraftjmphotocraft Registered Users Posts: 2,987 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2016
    Thanks everyone! I like the cropped one better too.
    -Jack

    An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
  • StumblebumStumblebum Registered Users Posts: 8,480 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2016
    Yeah improvement!
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