I really do love the first one. The minimalistic composition and high key conversion work very well for me. The transparency in the water at the bottom of the rocks, making them shine through and the structure and details of the rocks and the foreground sea are very pleasing to look at. And somehow it feels like it's having two horizontal lines there, which I like very much. Contrary to Taz, I do not miss something there
The second is too abstract for me, but that might just be me
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Thank you the first one is my favorite too. The texture of the second one is what caught my eye, but it may be too abstract and as Taz says has some distracting elements.
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First one is awesome.....but being spoiled by CA coast.....I wish I could see either birds or something else in it.....
The second one has couple of major eye pulls....both on top left and top right corners....the stones....
Cheers Cristobal.
I really do love the first one. The minimalistic composition and high key conversion work very well for me. The transparency in the water at the bottom of the rocks, making them shine through and the structure and details of the rocks and the foreground sea are very pleasing to look at. And somehow it feels like it's having two horizontal lines there, which I like very much. Contrary to Taz, I do not miss something there
The second is too abstract for me, but that might just be me
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I love the first shot - the flow of the water is mesmerizing.
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Thank you the first one is my favorite too. The texture of the second one is what caught my eye, but it may be too abstract and as Taz says has some distracting elements.
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Have you had any filter on the lense when taking the first one, Cristobal?
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Is there a transparent layer in front of the in focus boulder line?
In any event the image is very engaging
Nice job
Thanks! it was a 10 second exposure using a neutral density filter, The transparency comes from the long exposure.
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It's a nice effect! Thanks for sharing how you took the picture
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Glad to share!
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